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Author Topic: Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?  (Read 905 times)

abdbundeli

Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
« on: February 10, 2010, 08:51:11 PM »
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Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
Kahaan aa milogey: bataaougey kab tak?

Uyoonee takhaiul ayaan ho rahey hain:
Tasawwur ko dil mein chhupaaougey kab tak?

Naheen jaantey, jag rahaa huun dahar sey:
Lipat kar galey sey sulaaougey kab tak?

Andheyraa hai chaaroun taraf: kyaa karoon mein?
Galee mein kharhaa huun, bulaaougey kab tak?

Tabassum tumhaaraa khilaa hai jigar tak;
Mohabbat ko apnee rulaaougey kab tak?

Rawaan reyg mein muntazir huun azal sey:
Kaleyzey sey, aakhir, lagaaougey kab tak?

Kaheen zeest sey hi na mein roothh jaauun:
Na roothho, suno, tab manaaougey kab tak?

Qayaam-e-rah-e-hashra huun, jaag jaaou!
'Abd' so rahaa hai: uthhaaougey kab tak?

                      - abd bundeli

ShayarFamily--> Shayaro Ki Mehfil

Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
« on: February 10, 2010, 08:51:11 PM »

Jags

Re: Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
« Reply #1 on: February 11, 2010, 02:22:52 PM »
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Abdbundeli ji, It's a beautiful creation.... Ye to nahi kahunga ki mujhe sabhi shabd samajh aaye, lekin jo lines samajh saka wo dil ko chhu gayi.... meri daad kabool karein.... :cl:

abdbundeli

Re: Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
« Reply #2 on: February 11, 2010, 06:32:26 PM »
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Abdbundeli ji, It's a beautiful creation.... Ye to nahi kahunga ki mujhe sabhi shabd samajh aaye, lekin jo lines samajh saka wo dil ko chhu gayi.... meri daad kabool karein.... :cl:

Shukriyah, Jags ji! Koun sey alfaaz samajh nahin aaye, gar aap bataaney ki takleef gawaarah kareyngey, to, mein unkey 'meanings' bataa doongaa!

                  - abd bundeli

Radhika

Re: Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
« Reply #3 on: February 12, 2010, 11:03:33 PM »
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wah wah bohat khoob khoobsurat likha hai aapne abd ji.... :cl: :cl:
abd  ji 4 lines likh rahi hoon umeed hai aapko pasand aaye .. :hail:

Hum aapke intezaar mein khoye hai kabse
Ye aankein taras rahi hai dil bechain hai
Yun na satao humein k rulati hai aapki yaadein
Aapki yaadon mein na sowye hai na jaagein hai..

Honeyrose

abdbundeli

Re: Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
« Reply #4 on: February 13, 2010, 12:32:50 PM »
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wah wah bohat khoob khoobsurat likha hai aapne abd ji.... :cl: :cl:
abd  ji 4 lines likh rahi hoon umeed hai aapko pasand aaye .. :hail:

Hum aapke intezaar mein khoye hai kabse
Ye aankein taras rahi hai dil bechain hai
Yun na satao humein k rulati hai aapki yaadein
Aapki yaadon mein na sowye hai na jaagein hai..

Honeyrose


Thanks, Honey! Nice one!

Jaguun: jagtey-khwaab mein,
Jaagey wo gulfaam!
Souun: to bhi khwaab mein,
Jaagey raat tamaam!!

             - abd bundeli
« Last Edit: February 13, 2010, 12:36:13 PM by abdbundeli »

Radhika

Re: Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
« Reply #5 on: February 14, 2010, 03:30:02 PM »
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Thanks, Honey! Nice one!

Jaguun: jagtey-khwaab mein,
Jaagey wo gulfaam!
Souun: to bhi khwaab mein,
Jaagey raat tamaam!!

             - abd bundeli


bohat shukriya abd ji ... :hail:
kuch likh rahi hoon galati hogaye toh mauf kijiye abd ji
 :hail:


Mere har khwaab mein unki zikar hoti hai
Mere har gham mein unki yaadein basti hai
Woh duur hai humse ye gham satati hai
Mere rooh-e-jaan mein unki muhabbat hoti hai

abdbundeli

Re: Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
« Reply #6 on: February 14, 2010, 08:08:27 PM »
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bohat shukriya abd ji ... :hail:
kuch likh rahi hoon galati hogaye toh mauf kijiye abd ji
 :hail:


Mere har khwaab mein unki zikar hoti hai
Mere har gham mein unki yaadein basti hai
Woh duur hai humse ye gham satati hai
Mere rooh-e-jaan mein unki muhabbat hoti hai


DEAR HONEY !


A BUNCH OF FRESH RED ROSES,
TO ALL THOSE WHO LOVE REALLY,
FROM THE VERY CORE OF HEARTS,
SOME ONE, WHO'S DEAR AND WANTED,
BY EVERY BEAT OF THE LIFE!

                          - abd bundeli
« Last Edit: February 14, 2010, 08:19:28 PM by abdbundeli »

ShayarFamily--> Shayaro Ki Mehfil

Re: Hamain aur yuun hi sataaougey kab tak?
« Reply #6 on: February 14, 2010, 08:08:27 PM »

 

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