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Ghazals / aadin nisan jo baki the hata na sake
« on: September 29, 2009, 10:22:21 PM »
Mita gaya jo wajood mera khaak me
uske aks ko ham dil se mita na sake

jiski bewafaiyo ne kiya ruswa hame
ham use kabhi bewafa bana na sake

chipate rahe haal-e-dil har kisi se
ashk jo palko pe aaye chipa na sake

waqt ne bhar diye jakhm sare dil ke
aadin nisan jo baki the hata na sake


By - Aadin

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Ghazals / Ek chehara najar me jane
« on: September 29, 2009, 10:16:17 PM »
Dil Ke Kone me ye raaz chupaye rakha tha,
ek chehra najar me kabse basaye rakha tha

Kehna Chahta tha dil usse bahut pahle hi
Magar takalluf ne ye raj dabaaye rakha tha

Dil hi dil mein shab bhar sochta tha usko
bas zuban Ko khamosh banaye rakha tha

Jab kehti thi vo mujhe kisi aur ki baatien
jane kaise ye gham maine dabaye rakha tha

Roz jis rah per woh gujarti thi "Aadin"
phoolon ko un raho per bichhaye rakha tha

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Ghazals / usi nakhuda ne aadin phir aaj dubaya hame
« on: September 14, 2009, 10:56:44 AM »
yaad aaya jab bhi wo gujara jamana kabhi
ankho se bahte aansuo ne bahut rulaya hame

unhe bhulane ki kosis tamam naummid hogayi
Door jakar bhi hamse usne bahut sataya hame

Ishq ki gahraiyo se jo gujra na tha kabhi
fakat Usine aakhir bimar-e-ishq banaya hame

Thi jinse ummid meri kashti ko bachane ki
usi nakhuda ne aadin phir aaj dubaya hame


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Ghazals / ho jab tere bhi aise halat to maja kuch aur hai
« on: September 14, 2009, 10:55:50 AM »
Ho Hamsafar sath to chalne ka maja kuch aur hai

Ki Jalti shama ke sath jalne maja kuch aur hai

Yun to raat taro bhari bhi khoobsurat hoti hai

Ho sath chandni ke chand to maja kuch aur hai

Phulon ki khushboo se mahke hai gulshan kai

Ho jab us khushboo se nasha maja kuch aur hai

Tu mere sath nahi hai phir bhi mere sath hai

ho jab tere bhi aise halat to maja kuch aur hai

By - Aadin

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Badnaam mohabbat ke afsane bahut hai
aaj bhi tere saher me deewane bahut hai

Rishto ke tootne ke afsaane bahut hai
apne hai kuch to kuch begane bahut hai

teri ankho se piye to nasha bahut hai
kahne ko saher me maikhane bahut hai

tujhe dekh kar aayega sukoon dil ko
dil bahlane ke yun to bahane bahut hai

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Ho Hamsafar sath to chalne ka maja kuch aur hai

Ki Jalti shama ke sath jalne maja kuch aur hai

Yun to raat taro bhari bhi khoobsurat hoti hai

Ho sath chandni ke chand to maja kuch aur hai

Phulon ki khushboo se mahke hai gulshan kai

Ho jab us khushboo se nasha maja kuch aur hai

Tu mere sath nahi hai phir bhi mere sath hai

ho jab tere bhi aise halat to maja kuch aur hai

By - Aadin

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Love Shayri or Shayari e Ishq / Re: ~*Do PYase Dil*~
« on: July 14, 2009, 12:27:31 PM »
really beautiful Keep it up shivam

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SMS & Jokes Section.. / Santa in KBC
« on: July 14, 2009, 11:52:43 AM »
Kaun Banega Karodpati

For the guys n gals not in India, this is the Indian version of 'Who wants to be a Millionaire' and is anchored by Amitabh .

We have our famous friend Santa Singh qualifying for the hot seat.
( He pressed the buttons by accident and managed to qualify)

AB : OK Santa I congratulate you for this opportunity here with us.

Santa : Oh ji Wahe guru da khalsa wahe guru di fateh.
Chak denge phatte aj. Tusi start karo ji.

AB : OK Santa this is your first question for 1000

Rs. - 'Which state has the largest sikh population ?' and your options are

A. Punjab
B. Punjab
C. Punjab
D. Punjab
Santa : Oh ji how much time do I've to answer this question

AB : Samay ki koi pabandhi nahi hai Santa ji, you can take your time

Santa (giggles) : Sir ji tricky sawaal puchha hai aapne. I would like to use my lifeline.

AB : I'm not surprised on this , which one wud U like to use.

Santa : Audience poll

AB : OK audience please be ready with your voting pads, and your time starts now.

After a minute we have a graphic presentation on the board.
A. 25%
B. 25%
C. 25%
D. 25%

AB : Santa ji, this is a no good situation for you, I can share your disgust here.

Santa : Yeh mere saath hi kyon hota hai. Fasa diya Sirji aapki audience ne. I think I've to use my second lifeline - 50 50.

AB : Very good ! 50 50 ka istemal karna chahenge. OK
computer ji do galat jawab mita diye jayen.

Computer displays A. Punjab and C. Punjab

Santa : Badi chalu machine hai aapki sar ji. Mein
chodoonga nahi aaj isko. Wahe guru de kasam mereko third life line bhi chahiye.

AB : Kamal hai Santa ji, I must congratulate you, You have record of using all the lifelines in the very first question.
This is great . OK phone a friend - kisko phone karna chahen ge aap.

Santa : My one and only one... mera langotiya yaar., Banta Singh.

AB : OK Banta ko phone lagaya jaye.
Phone rings. Banta picks it ' Hulloooooo, kon hai oye
adi raati,???'

AB : Hello Banta ji , mein Amitabh Bachhan bol raha hoon Star Plus ke Kaun Banega Crorepati se.

Banta : OOOOOOOOOO Bachan ji Sasriyakal, koi hor hota to uski to mein #_^_%_#_%_%_&. Ke hal chal he sar ji.

AB : Mein thik hoon Banta ji, par ye ek family show hai is liye aap apshabdon ka prayog na karen to behtar hoga. Aapke dost yahaan bethe hain mere saath
aur.................

Banta (Interrupts) : Aur wo sala pehle hi question pe atak gaya hoga, khota hai sala. Sawal pucho ji.

AB : Aapko sirf tees second .,.............. chaliye mein aapko special case karte hue 1 minute doonga. Aur aapka samay shuru hota hai aab.

Santa : Oye bante ke ho raya hai yaar ??

Banta : oye ullu de dum, saale bahar se taala laga gaya khote. Sawere dud wala aaya si, paise mang raya si, aur khotya tu meri kameez pehen gaya. Sale chakki se aata lana tha, tera baap laye ga.

AB : Santa ji kya kar rahe hain samay khatam ho raha hai.

Santa : Yes Yes. Oye chod use yaar question hai
..................... (he tells him the question).

Banta : Saale sari zindagi tere nakal mar ke fail hota raha hoon, par iska answer mujhe aata hai.

Kalank hai tu Punjab ke naam pe . Iska answer Punjab hai lallu.

Santa : oye par ......... (and the clock stops).

AB : Samay khatam, aapke mitr ne jawab de diya hai , ab to mujhe pakka confidence hai ke aap kam se kam 1000 to le ke jayenge hi aaj.

Santa : Ullu ka patha hai ji, ye to mujhe bhi pata hai par sale ne yeh to batya nahin ke A hai ya C hai.

And this was the last episode of KBC as most of the audience died laughing...

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Duniya ko mohabbat se nafrat bahut hai
phir bhi hame is shai-se shiddat bahut hai

raste hai mushkil chalna bhi bahut hai
par kya kare saaye ki jarurat bhi bahut hai

ankho me meri ashkon ke tufaan bahut hai
sagar hai paas mere phir bhi pyas bahut hai

Aadin khidki pe roshan charag bahut hai
phir bhi lagta hai darr ki abhi raat bahut hai


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Miscellaneous Shayri.. / ???? ?? ???? ?? ????? ????? ?? ?? ??? ??
« on: July 14, 2009, 01:59:55 AM »

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Ghayal Sahab ki Salah acchi hai par itna bada issue nahi hai. Koi bhi yaha Dusre shayar ki shayaries post karta hai to waha apna naam nahi likhta isliye aisa karna galat nahi. kyunki ye ek entertainment forum hai ek community hai. Agar koi kisi aur ki ghajal ke sath NM nahi likhta to use Issue na banaye aap us shayar ka naam apne reply me daal de agar apko pata ho to us shayr ko bhi bahut se log pahchan lenge. Kyunki Main Gorakhpur se hoon jaha Firaq Gorakhpuri aur Zafar sahab jaise shayar hue hai aur afsos ki Zafar sahab ki Biography apko Pure Internet par kahi nahi milegi.

Yaha members kuch bhi share karte hai jaise Jokes, poems, stories to bus entertainment ke liye, isse unka koi personal profit nahi hai. Baat rahi us shayar ki jiski ghajal yaha post hoti hai to aap us post ki first line Google me daal karke search kar le ghayal sahab is forum ke alawa aise hajaro forum milenge jaha wo post kisi aur ne share ki hai bina NM ke.

Iska matlab ye nahi ki usne chori ki, usne kahi kuch accha padha aur apni friend community me sabke sath share kar diya. Ghayal sahab acchi ghajal ko share karna galat nahi jab tak share karne wala waha apna naam na likhe. Aur aisa yaha ab tak kisi ne nahi kiya. Aapke Jajbaat ki kadra karta hoon lekin yaha log Entertainment ke liye aate hai khushiya batne isme matlab nikalna galat hai.

Main khud kai acche shayar ki shayari post karta hoon, Par jo meri likhi hoti hai waha mera naam hota hai. Aur meri khud ki likhi ghajale kai Blogs par users ne post ki hai par ye galat nahi kyunki meri ghajal ka copyright nahi hai aur na mujhe jarurat hai.

Ye meri personal Feelings hai sare members bhi apni opinion de sakte hai.

Thanks
Aadin


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« on: July 11, 2009, 07:36:21 PM »
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Shayari e Dard or Pain in Love / Re: Mill gayi aapko fursat kaisey
« on: July 09, 2009, 09:07:30 AM »
Masha allah itni acchi subah aisi hii ghajal ke sath honi chahiye Hussaini ji

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Khoobsurat rachna hai simran ji, keep it up  :cl:

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Love Shayri or Shayari e Ishq / Re: Dil me basaya hai tumhe
« on: July 09, 2009, 08:35:16 AM »
Thank you Shivam

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