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Author Topic: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )  (Read 2085 times)

sajid_ghayel

Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« on: July 15, 2009, 04:13:16 PM »
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Jab kisi ke sath koi hadsa guzarta hain, to hum use bohat dilasa dete hain. Par jab aisa hi kuch apne sath hota hain to hum na jane q sab bhool jate hain.......aur shayed sach bhi yahi hain kisi ka dard batne me aur dard sehne me bohat fark hota hain. Bas isi kudarati jazbe ko bayaan karne ki koshish ki hain.........

KOI ZARA YEH BATAYE YEH KAISA SHOR HAIN
YEH KAISI BHEED HAIN KYA MARA AAJ KOI AUR HAIN
Q ROTE HO TUM SABHI Q AASU BAHATE HO
MARNA HUM SABKO HAI Q YEH BHOOL JATE HO

USI DAM KAHI BHEED SE MERE BETE KA DOST MERE PAAS AA GAYA
NA JANE USKI AAKHO ME KYA THA DIL MERA BHI GHABRA GAYA
USNE KAHA YEH SACH HAIN BABA KHUDA NE KIYA HAIN SABR TUMKO ATA
PAR YEH KAISE IS DIL KO SAMJAOO MERA DOST "SAJID" NA ZINDA RAHA
APNE BACHCHE KA NAM SUNKE MAINE THAMA USKE GIREBAN KO
BHALA KAISE MAF KARTA MAIN USKE IS BAYAAN KO

NA JANE MERE SABR KO KYA HO GAYA
JO DUSRO KO TASALLI DETA THA WOH BABA NA JANE KAHA KHO GAYA
AAKHO SE GIRE DI MAINE KHUDA KO SADA
ZINDAGI LENI HI THI TO MERI Q NA LI KYA THI MERE BACHCHE KI KHATA
MERE BUDHAPE KI LATHI THA WOH THA MERA SAHARA
EK MERA HI NAHI HAR GHAR KA THA WOH DULARA

ITNE ME EK BUDHA SHAKS AAKER KEHNE LAGA
KOI ZARA YEH BATAYE YEH KAISA SHOR HAIN
YEH KAISI BHEED HAI KYA MARA AAJ KOI AUR HAI............

-Sajid Ghayel-

ShayarFamily--> Shayaro Ki Mehfil

Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« on: July 15, 2009, 04:13:16 PM »

Aafreen

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #1 on: July 16, 2009, 08:47:28 PM »
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Its very true and very very beautiful

Excellent Work Sajid :cl:

Radhika

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #2 on: July 16, 2009, 11:15:47 PM »
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 :cl: :cl: wah Sajid ji bohat umda likha hai aapne g88 lines... :)

sajid_ghayel

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #3 on: July 16, 2009, 11:34:06 PM »
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Its very true and very very beautiful

Excellent Work Sajid :cl:

Shukriyaa Aafreen jee jo aapne apna waqt diya....

sajid_ghayel

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #4 on: July 16, 2009, 11:36:50 PM »
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:cl: :cl: wah Sajid ji bohat umda likha hai aapne g88 lines... :)

Nawazish karam hain Jaya Jee..

Shivam

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #5 on: July 17, 2009, 10:31:13 AM »
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very nice :cl: :cl: :cl:

SARVESH RASTOGI

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #6 on: July 17, 2009, 12:59:15 PM »
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Ghayel Saheb
Very true and very touching creation
bol sidhe dil se nikal rahe hain
But I wish to submit
Kindly change the mood
Kuchh husn-o-ishq, sharab-o-shabab ki batein kijiye
Mehfil jamaiye, maza aayega
Aap ummeedon se bhari ghazalen badi achchhi likhte hain, wohi likhiye
All the best
SARVESH RASTOGI

sajid_ghayel

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #7 on: July 18, 2009, 06:51:55 PM »
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very nice :cl: :cl: :cl:

Bohat bohat shukriyaan Shivam saheb....

sajid_ghayel

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #8 on: July 18, 2009, 06:56:16 PM »
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Ghayel Saheb
Very true and very touching creation
bol sidhe dil se nikal rahe hain
But I wish to submit
Kindly change the mood
Kuchh husn-o-ishq, sharab-o-shabab ki batein kijiye
Mehfil jamaiye, maza aayega
Aap ummeedon se bhari ghazalen badi achchhi likhte hain, wohi likhiye
All the best
SARVESH RASTOGI

Zaroor bhai main koshish karta hu waise Ghayel aadmi hu jab kuch likhta hu lafzo se aah hi nikalti hain... [doh]
« Last Edit: July 18, 2009, 06:58:29 PM by sajid_ghayel »

RimJhim

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #9 on: July 22, 2009, 07:37:17 PM »
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Too Gud, Very Deep and Touching  [:t:]


Aafreen

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #10 on: July 22, 2009, 07:41:20 PM »
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Jab kisi ke sath koi hadsa guzarta hain, to hum use bohat dilasa dete hain. Par jab aisa hi kuch apne sath hota hain to hum na jane q sab bhool jate hain.......aur shayed sach bhi yahi hain kisi ka dard batne me aur dard sehne me bohat fark hota hain. Bas isi kudarati jazbe ko bayaan karne ki koshish ki hain.........

KOI ZARA YEH BATAYE YEH KAISA SHOR HAIN
YEH KAISI BHEED HAIN KYA MARA AAJ KOI AUR HAIN
Q ROTE HO TUM SABHI Q AASU BAHATE HO
MARNA HUM SABKO HAI Q YEH BHOOL JATE HO

USI DAM KAHI BHEED SE MERE BETE KA DOST MERE PAAS AA GAYA
NA JANE USKI AAKHO ME KYA THA DIL MERA BHI GHABRA GAYA
USNE KAHA YEH SACH HAIN BABA KHUDA NE KIYA HAIN SABR TUMKO ATA
PAR YEH KAISE IS DIL KO SAMJAOO MERA DOST "SAJID" NA ZINDA RAHA
APNE BACHCHE KA NAM SUNKE MAINE THAMA USKE GIREBAN KO
BHALA KAISE MAF KARTA MAIN USKE IS BAYAAN KO

NA JANE MERE SABR KO KYA HO GAYA
JO DUSRO KO TASALLI DETA THA WOH BABA NA JANE KAHA KHO GAYA
AAKHO SE GIRE DI MAINE KHUDA KO SADA
ZINDAGI LENI HI THI TO MERI Q NA LI KYA THI MERE BACHCHE KI KHATA
MERE BUDHAPE KI LATHI THA WOH THA MERA SAHARA
EK MERA HI NAHI HAR GHAR KA THA WOH DULARA

ITNE ME EK BUDHA SHAKS AAKER KEHNE LAGA
KOI ZARA YEH BATAYE YEH KAISA SHOR HAIN
YEH KAISI BHEED HAI KYA MARA AAJ KOI AUR HAI............

-Sajid Ghayel-


 :excellent:
Bahut Khoob Sajid  :cl: [:gj]

Azeem,.

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #11 on: July 22, 2009, 08:02:49 PM »
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Mashallah BohatAchcha Likha Hai Aapne SajidBhai,.
Keep It Up./

sajid_ghayel

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #12 on: July 22, 2009, 08:19:21 PM »
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Too Gud, Very Deep and Touching  [:t:]



Bohat bohat shukriyaan Rim Jhim jee....

sajid_ghayel

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #13 on: July 22, 2009, 08:21:21 PM »
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:excellent:
Bahut Khoob Sajid  :cl: [:gj]

Thank You Aafreen jee for your time and comment....

sajid_ghayel

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #14 on: July 22, 2009, 08:23:27 PM »
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Mashallah BohatAchcha Likha Hai Aapne SajidBhai,.
Keep It Up./

Bohat shukriyaan Chote for your encouragement.....

ShayarFamily--> Shayaro Ki Mehfil

Re: Jab apne par Bith_ti hain...( Ghayel )
« Reply #14 on: July 22, 2009, 08:23:27 PM »

 

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